It's in the bag comments
I think the beginning would have a bigger impact if you let us know how many hands she was holding the bag with. In my mind she was only using one the first read through. But I imagined it with two and I could really feel the “weight” of it. Also whats he motivation behind killing her current boyfriend? It seems like she was only going to kill Michael’s family if they answered...
That boy meets girl post is legit. Have you ever considered writing something somewhat serious, but at the same time creative? Diversify yourself son! Your personal style of writing could benefit. Also keep up the good stuff..it’s in the bag made me lol.
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I decided to not make a whole new page for this stupid thing but its worth posting I guess. The assignment was to write a monologue from the perspective of an inanimate object. I also read it in front of a crowd whilst doing stand up comedy. Also: will some one leave me some g-damn feedback. how am i supposed to suck less without some suggestions. Or if you are too nice for those kind...